Big Write Star March 8th

 

Tiyah

 

Tiyah uses very adventurous and descriptive vocab in her writing. She enjoys bringing her writing to life and engaging the reader. She also including the correct punctuation in the correct place. Well done Tiyah!!

Big Write Star 7th Feb 2013

 

Zofia

 

Zofia developed her story with a clear beginning middle and end. She used all the correct punctuation and even included an ellipse!! Her writing was lively and exciting for the reader to enjoy. Keep it up Zofia!!

 

Big Write Star 1st February 2013

 

Teegan

 

Teegan made me laugh with her humorous introduction and then she used speech to develop her characters, with speech marks in all the correct places!!! Well done Teegan!!

Big Write Star Jan 25th 2013

 

Jodie

 

Jodie amazed me with her wonderful description. I found her story so exciting and interesting to read because of all the ambitious vocabulary! Super story Jodie!

Big Write Star!! 18th January 2013

 

Connor

 

Connor use some adventurous vocabulary in his story about the pirate chest. He included great description, and developed his story with a beginning, sequence of events and an ending. He also had beautiful handwriting with carefully formed letters.

Big Write Star of the Week!!

 

Tayjus!

 

Tayjus ensures every sentence he writes makes sense, he uses the correct tense, and some very high level words to make his writing exciting and interesting for the reader. He has also used a wide range of punctuation in the correct place! Well done Tayjus!!

Big Write Star of the Week!!

Grace!

 

Grace used some super bossy verbs in her Georges Marvellous Medicine instructions. She had wonderful handwriting and used correct punctuation. She showed she knew the required elements her instructional writing needed and made them interesting for the reader!

 

 

Another Super Big Write Session!

Here we are again, all busy and using our imagination in our Big Write session on Friday! I am so proud of the quality of writing everyone is producing, I can see how much you have all progressed already since we came back at the start of September! Keep it up year 2 you are making me so happy!

Talk homework!

Here is your talk homework: to discuss this picture:

Who made it? What is at the other end? Where does it lead to? Who are the other two people? When was it made?

Use you VCOP skills to think of fantastic vocabulary, openers and connectives you can use in your writing!

(The image was taken from the website http://www.literacyshed.com/ where there are lots of interesting and engaging images and videos)