Sunday 10 February 2013

Big Write Star 7th Feb 2013

 
Zofia
 
Zofia developed her story with a clear beginning middle and end. She used all the correct punctuation and even included an ellipse!! Her writing was lively and exciting for the reader to enjoy. Keep it up Zofia!!
 

3 comments:

  1. your bigwrite was really amazig from leah

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  2. We have seen your work - Tean

    We have a big writ party and top tip tigers- mira.

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  3. we love your work-mira and tean at Brookhill LEys.

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